A FANTASY THAT MAY BE FINAL

[azdahebrewhamr]

cnc

 

[Jupiter]

everything but your render stands out lol

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

i think it stands out fine...

 

[TRu SANDMAN Cd]

truthfully man not your best looks like your fighting some rust from being away from designing for so long Im use to see way more epic stuff from you. I'm sure you will find it again

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

cn yall tell me whats wrong with it? i honestly thought it was my best since i started again

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

wayto many colors to find a balance

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

there are 2

 

[Jupiter]

i wouldnt say theres too many but they are awfully bright.

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

if they were toned down itd look colorless

 

[Jupiter]

why do u ask for cnc if youre just gonna keep going against everything anyone tells you -.-

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

im not tryin to, its just the cnc ive gotten so far hasnt made any sense :/

 

[Jupiter]

then you tell us whats wrong with it since we obviously dont know? honestly everything around your render is overpowering and ive tried to tell you by saying ur render didnt stand out or that the colors are too bright. if youre not going to listen then dont ask, please.

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

thats what im asking. Look, im not tryin to start anything the week i get back. im just saying when u look at the piece, you cant say theres too much color or too many colors. i was mainly worried about lighting and blending

 

[FoCus]

well the right side of the focal seems just black and white while hes being surrounded by white, pink and blue. Maybe add a bit more pink and blue light reflections. I like how the colours are but theres this little dark streak on the right side of the sig that look a bit odd to me.

 

[Jupiter]

im not trying to start anything either lol but when someones tyring to help and u keep going against them it gets kinda old lol

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

well the right side of the focal seems just black and white while hes being surrounded by white, pink and blue. Maybe add a bit more pink and blue light reflections. I like how the colours are but theres this little dark streak on the right side of the sig that look a bit odd to me.

thankss braahh

 

[Snyder GFX]

not your best its super lq the bg looks like you tossed a bucket of paint on it there is no visible flow the colors dont really match the render which seems hidden .. also a solid light source would help

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

thanks man. ya the whole background is a ink/paint splatter texture... it was kinda the look i was goin for but i c wat u mean. imma work on the lighting in this tag n how do u mean by the render being hidden?

 

[Snyder GFX]

when i first looked at it i didnt see the render mabey its the color dot ?? ooo thunder lol