ADVICE ANYONE?

[Silvyy]

I started a Tag awhile back and have been playing around with ideas for awhile. Its a good Stock with a lot of potential.

So far this is my outcome:

I am working on added depth as of now.

CnC?

Topics:
Text or No Text?
Effects?
Ideas?

Stupid Comments = Bad Rep!
[For Example, a post that says "Needs Lightning and Depth", I realize that, tell me how instead of being a worthless fool]

 

[XDC Swagg]

Pretty funny stock .

::imo don't use text as for the stock itself is too big and the text will take up more room.
::imo the bg needs a better atmosphere; maybe take a texture based bg and then mess around with some settings.
::Since it's just the start of the siggy you know that you need to add effects to the signature.
::imo you should go with some bright colored fractals to create the flow of the signature.
::If your not comfortable with fractals find some C4D's and play around with the coloring because as of now the the signature is monotone alongside the bg.
::On the issue of flow the stock is going from left to right on an angle; there is a fractal or effect of some sorts on the left side that contradicts the flow. Try to adjust the way it is and turn it towards the flow of the bg.
::Once you are finished I would burn the ouside edges.

Overall nice start, I didn't mention anything on lighting and dpeth because I figured you already knew that ...

Post the outcome

 

[Brohaffey]

I was going to saw, for starters, turn the smoke effect at the same angle as the stock, but Perfect said it first.