AO2 40TH DAY

[Silvyy]

OMG Silvy tried something new, and it actually looks good CnC?!

 

[The Big Tickett]

Needs a light source. Flow needs work. Work on your smudging. Needs depth. Not bad overall. KIU

 

[XGC Paramore]

Im going to have to agree with ticket. As well it seems pretty dull.

 

[Fillyy]

Agreeing with ticket, the smudge you have on the guys shoulders should be in the direction of the background, to create flow. Also the background should have flowed with the render.