AZ AND DTOWN COLLAB

azdahebrewhamr

azdahebrewhamr

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now its smexy :)

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The Big Tickett

The Big Tickett

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Well, ya know there is nothing more to say really. No CnCing because it is always perfect lol. I'll try to think of other things lol. "Perfect" "Amazing" "Awesome" lol jk.
 
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NecroWhuut

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take the "az & dtown collab" out, if you want it to have it saying that do it in the same style as the other text, and make it small>>keep it close to the focal. the light source is over powering try using the dodge toll an an apply image layer at the end to do lighting, it makes it look more natural. the flow is off behind his back because of the black burred thing.

other than that it looks pretty good maybe a bit to much negative space. KIU ;)
 
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KoG Houdini

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Suicide said:
take the "az & dtown collab" out, if you want it to have it saying that do it in the same style as the other text, and make it small>>keep it close to the focal. the light source is over powering try using the dodge toll an an apply image layer at the end to do lighting, it makes it look more natural. the flow is off behind his back because of the black burred thing.

other than that it looks pretty good maybe a bit to much negative space. KIU ;)
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Agreed.

it looks good though..
keep it up!!!
 
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ChangeOfMandate

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I like the effect on the right, where he kind of swirls out of the BG, but the bit on the left seems off somehow. I can't explain it.

It still looks amazing, of course.

Amazing enough that I was like staring at it for a whiiiiiiiiile.
 
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Brohaffey

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Nice overall, but my criticism is the same as Suicide's. Text is usually pretty nasty in collabs ... so I'm not gonna gripe at ya, but it is something to think about. :)
 
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