azdahebrewhamr
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pretty simple smudges and and ugly asian tag... CNCplox
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pretty simple smudges and and ugly asian tag... CNCplox
Quantum733
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Top one has a few things that stood out to me, lighting being one of the major ones. The light source next to her head seems a little too distracting for how wide of a tag it is. Second thing is the depth on the spirals next to her head isn't very defined; it's kind of confusing to be honest. Overall, the tag also seems slightly low quality. Likin your kind of flow with the effects that draw inward towards the upper center of the tag. Great c4d work on that one.
Really like the colors on the second one, as I also like the transition between them. Only minor critiques (you know me
full of minor critiques) I have are the extra circles of color around the two larger circles on the upper and lower part of the tag. You have the glowing circle, then an extra almost stroke-like border around those two which I don't know how they could have got there, but they don't really fit in my opinion (that one was really minor ). And the orange circle on the far right is kinda blocky.
Liking the added strokes in the colors on the third tag (looks kind of like a liquify but not really) and the added splatters as well. Only main issue I have with this tag is the not as smooth flow as it could have been. Seems a little choppy on the red (left) side. Round up that orange circle, work on that flow, and you can call this one good
Keep practicin and all of these elements will come back quickly (same thing I need to do ), but until then, thats my CnC that you asked for Keep it up AZ! Overall these tags are good; I just try to help point out some things to improve on.
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Really like the colors on the second one, as I also like the transition between them. Only minor critiques (you know me
full of minor critiques) I have are the extra circles of color around the two larger circles on the upper and lower part of the tag. You have the glowing circle, then an extra almost stroke-like border around those two which I don't know how they could have got there, but they don't really fit in my opinion (that one was really minor ). And the orange circle on the far right is kinda blocky. Liking the added strokes in the colors on the third tag (looks kind of like a liquify but not really) and the added splatters as well. Only main issue I have with this tag is the not as smooth flow as it could have been. Seems a little choppy on the red (left) side. Round up that orange circle, work on that flow, and you can call this one good
Keep practicin and all of these elements will come back quickly (same thing I need to do ), but until then, thats my CnC that you asked for
Keep it up AZ! Overall these tags are good; I just try to help point out some things to improve on./end CNC mode