You have a nice balance and color flow going on however the font most definitely draws all the attention. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. Since you didn't try to make the dragon the focal AND use huge text, it works in this situation. The dragon seems as it was put there just to compliment the text. Sometimes, if you have a weird image to work with.. Your only choice is to try a text focal and have the image requested compliment it. I would however suggest that you play around with gradients on your text and try to get some shadows/highlights going on. The flat color isn't doing it for me. Nice work though
