CNC? #2

[KoG Mufasa]

Still having problems with text :/ I have always found it to be the hardest part lol.

 

[IXssl]

I usually put the text as close to the Focal as possible on 12 ft but whatever looks good with the picture but also it looks like you put a dissolve filter around it I'm not really feeling it because you can see it in the background that it doesn't have the same effect on it as the focal. I honestly and this is just me that it throws it off and the one c4d on the right is just there I don't feel it goes with the flow you have already but like I said it's just me. But all in all you did a really good job

 

[Jupiter]

The solid line on the right side takes away from any flow you had. I would get rid of that all together. For the font, I would place it right above the embellishment on his arm and play around with the color so it doesnt blend too much with that area. Nice job overall though.

 

[KoG Mufasa]

agh! i forgot to erase some of the stuff behind the focal. that stuff behind the focal is a ripple layer and i meant to erase some parts around the left side and the head :/ as for the c4d, i was trying to do kind of a V around the focal but it didn't really work that way i guess.

Thanks!

 

[IXssl]

By no stretch of the imagination is it not not good, its a very well made sig just a few minor tweaks and it's perfect. but I totally got what you were trying to do with the V just with c4d's it's either a hit or miss, either it'll work or it won't in this case it didn't but I got you on your vision.