they are a cool effect but theres too much tone it down some if youre gonna have them right by his face and yeah move the text to the right.. do you know the rule of thirds? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds usually text looks pretty good around the middle 4 corners. USUALLY...not all the time .. it just depends on where your image is and when you tone down the pixel effect maybe make his arm (i think thats what it is?) a little more visible where you have them cuz the top of his arm sort of appears out of no where