CNC, ITS BEEN A WHILE PLEASE BE HONEST

[Sgt DeathSquad]

 

[Rave]

1) You have what I like to call the floating head. It needs more of the focal, not just the head.
2) The random effect that you have that goes through the soldiers head is distracting.
3) Very plain. try putting more effects into it like C4D's and Fractals.

I hope this helps you.

 

[Jupiter]

^^ agree with the floating head.
he needs to be blended in to the background better
& try to keep your text out of corners

 

[xxThanatosx89]

I don't like how it looks like the back his head is cut off

 

[Sgt DeathSquad]

awesome guys thank you and that is something i will figure out better lol