CNC PLEASE

[The Big Tickett]

 

[ChangeOfMandate]

Don't care for the font, or placement of the text. Also, the spiral in the BG, of blue, seems a bit out of place. Perhaps a lighter red?

 

[Sneakyy]

just looks plain to me...

try adding some flow with abtract c4ds
and G. blur them and or smudge the a bit

 

[The Big Tickett]

Is this any better?

CnC this too. I know it is way too bright, I'm not sure why.

 

[Sneakyy]

Yeah, it looks a little better.

#2
put a black layer on top
and set it to soft light
Lower op. as neccessary

whatever is around the render is bad

 

[The Big Tickett]

I figured it out. Any better?

 

[Fillyy]

I dont care for the fractal in the background. on number 2.
Number 1 i would move the render up just a tad. It looks like its giving me the nono finger.

 

[The Big Tickett]

Lol, I never noticed that. Well it is not lol. I kinda agree with you on the second. I'll fix em up.

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

Add some effect c4ds for flow. And get rid of the fractal. Expirement with the colors some too.

 

[Sneakyy]

Looks better

i agree with AZ

 

[The Big Tickett]

Is this any better? I am not too good with flow, are there any tutorials on making it flow better?

 

[ChangeOfMandate]

I'd place that render in the BG behind Altair, so it looks like the steam color is coming off of him.I also suggest moving him a bit to the left, and the Name Slot to the way bottom right. Well, depending on if you don't mind apperant text.

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

Still don't like it... Are those scat lines in the back?

 

[The Big Tickett]

What are scat lines?

 

[Fillyy]

lines that you see on userbars. Those look like scanlines to me.