the flow on the signature is off/all over the place. and the lightsource is coming in different directions. look up tutorials and pick up ideas you can incorperate in your signatures.
the flow on the signature is off/all over the place. and the lightsource is coming in different directions. look up tutorials and pick up ideas you can incorperate in your signatures.
I understand what you're saying about the flow. THe c4d is all over the place. But I don't know what you mean about the light source. It's coming down from the top of him, and the shadows on his arm come from his shoulder armor. I'm not arguing with your CNC, I just want to know where else you see the lighting coming from?
i dont see a problem with the lighting of the sig other than you dont really have any dark areas. you need a good balance between the lighting and the shadows.
Not a fan of your new text. It's too big and the stroke around it looks bad. As for the flow, don't feel hesitant erasing some of the C4D that you don't like. Keep parts that you think give it flow and not clutter. Besides that one C4D, also try incorporating more effects into it. Keep doing tutorials and practicing so that you can get better.