well,first thing i noticed about this sig is that the contrast is a bit harsh
having one focal point is enough but since u went for ill give a kudo
try to stick with one or the other in my opinion,black and white with a splash of color
or color or black and white,try not to do one then the other on the same focal
another thing is that the birds wings ruins your flow,i say take the wings out
as-well as the colored version of the chick and see what you have i think it could be
a decent piece
