CNC PLEASE

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SYN IMPULSEz XS

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the text is not that good I know but I just needed something to put there.... please CnC as hard as yall want I want your opinions.

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Inked Ivy

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  • Her face isn't very clear, it looks like it is foggy/blurry. Erase whatever is producing the effect or sharpen her up a bit and it will be better. I know that to some extent the effect is probably intentional however it is a bit too strong.
  • Lighting isn't very strong or appropriate. The shadowing on her face isn't too clear so I don't blame you for not having defined lighting.
  • Right side is lacking detail. Try adding a dark c4d on a low opacity or a star/galaxy stock over the sig on lighten/soft light - whatever looks best.
  • Placement of the girl is pretty good.

KIU. You've got the skill you just need to refine the outcome.
 
Jupiter

Jupiter

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Well aside from what I mentioned to you in the party, the part of the road i guess it is thats closest to her fact is a bit choppy looking. id work on smoothing out that edge a bit. I also dont like the test too much, it looks kind off jagged/choppy. im not sure if its the font or what.
I agree with ivy, you have the skill but you just need to work on a few things. Keep up the good work impulse.
 
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