I like the effects and like the flow. its a nice clean sig but the text ruines it!!! Text is THEE hardest thing to make look good so that it doesnt ruin the sig!! Thats just my opinion!! lol
For a Black and White signature, you don't really want to use color for text rather, use white, black, or a shade of grey. If the text is colored, it draws attention away from the focal and onto the text. Not a bad sig though.
Okay we are getting there. Now you should make the text a little smaller and try placing it below the sword going horizontally instead of Diagonally. Right now the text looks a little blurry.