XGC Paramore
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Hey guys this is my most recent work. took me a couple hours to make this. I know its not really good. But I'm working with stocks and everyone knows that is not my specialty. So Critque is welcomed.
CW - BEAU BLESSTHEFALL
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Hey guys this is my most recent work. took me a couple hours to make this. I know its not really good. But I'm working with stocks and everyone knows that is not my specialty. So Critque is welcomed.
I am a hugeeeeeeeeeee blessthefall fan man! I seen them sooo many times, and met them so many times! So when I saw the name beau I was like AHHHH!!!
I feel like when I first saw this I was looking a two images. The is a line in the middle that like divides the light from beau. Then that dark image, im guessing teh Witness album, kinda throws me off. The text of beau is suiting though, personally I would put it closer to the focal. idkkk I dont think its your best workk, i Just feel like its missing something! :\
Overall, I like it though! You motivated me to want to make one of him now lolol! I mean he is the greatest singer ever!
I feel like when I first saw this I was looking a two images. The is a line in the middle that like divides the light from beau. Then that dark image, im guessing teh Witness album, kinda throws me off. The text of beau is suiting though, personally I would put it closer to the focal. idkkk I dont think its your best workk, i Just feel like its missing something! :\
Overall, I like it though! You motivated me to want to make one of him now lolol! I mean he is the greatest singer ever!
XGC Paramore
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Lol I am a big fan of blessthefall. Beau, Jared, and Matt have to be the best ppl to hang with after a concert. And this year at the 2010 Warped Tour in Uniondale, NY. Jared and Matt are coming to chill with me and a couple of my friends at Warped Tour. I'm so excited to see them again. Its been a while since they came to NY. But I also Have images of Jared, Matt, Mike, and Eric that I am also trying to work on, as well as there Witness album cover
XGC Paramore
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But thx for the Critique but as I said before. I'm working with stocks and I'm not really good with working on them so I'm trying to get better.
XGC Chocobo
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I agree about the light being divided here, I'm not sure I mind it, but the flow might be less interupted if you try to bring some of that light across the upper portion of the sig. I would add something darker in the upper left portion of it, as well. When there's that much light it looks bland and empty.
Also, to bring in some of that light, and make things more readable, change the text behind him to that lighter yellow color. You may also want to choose a more legible font for it. I can't even tell what it says. I mean, I know, from the thread title, but I can't READ it.
I also agree the other text is too far from the image. Bring it closer to him, to the left of the base of his neck or somewhere near there.
Also, to bring in some of that light, and make things more readable, change the text behind him to that lighter yellow color. You may also want to choose a more legible font for it. I can't even tell what it says. I mean, I know, from the thread title, but I can't READ it.
I also agree the other text is too far from the image. Bring it closer to him, to the left of the base of his neck or somewhere near there.
XGC Paramore
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In the process of making edits thx for the critiques
XGC Paramore
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I'm still in progress of editing it, I just wanna hear your thoughts on it now.
without blessthefall text
with blessthefall text
I tried playing with the Light source as well as removing the blur on the right side of the sig.
And as told I moved the "Beau" text closer and increased the "blessthefall" text and as well removed it in another one
without blessthefall text
with blessthefall text
I tried playing with the Light source as well as removing the blur on the right side of the sig.
And as told I moved the "Beau" text closer and increased the "blessthefall" text and as well removed it in another one
Ahhh! Dudeee your luckkyyy! I hung out with them last time I saw them in NY and we played ping-pong, instead of me going to see the headliner lololol...Beau is by and Matt are by-far the coolest people in the band! I would either move the Beau(Text) up a little or make the blessthefall text smaller. (btw my old gamertag was BTF lololol
I would either move the Beau(Text) up a little or make the blessthefall text smaller. (btw my old gamertag was BTF lololol
XGC Paramore
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Lmao niceeeeee.
XGC Paramore
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Ok so I moved the txt for the Beau a little up as u said as displayed on my sig but today i did this for no reason. Idk why i did it and it just came out like this. so i guess yall can cnc on this too
