DTOWN AZ COLLAB NUMERO DOS!!

azdahebrewhamr

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not too shabby :)
 

NecroWhuut

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oversaturated, text is bad, not digging the sqaures that are in it, and lighting/blending could be better. looks pretty good around the focal but still somewhat empty on the right side, maybe try adding more things to the foreground in the blank spaces to make the tag look less empty. and o/p map is its downfall for me mainly bc i cant stand it. looks pretty good, just somethings need to be tweeked with a little bit and added in order to make it perfect. KIU ;)
 

NecroWhuut

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if you go on full time gfx sites for a little while your C&Cs tend to sound way meaner, but im not trying to be mean xD its just like dtown said proper C&C is that way, bc what it is, is criticsizing the tag/or w.e fully with no bull**** lol.
 

SYN Godfather

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very true, but I don't really criticize each aspect of it (blank spaces, squares, etc.), but the whole image overall, which I think is great in this case
 

azdahebrewhamr

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oversaturated, text is bad, not digging the sqaures that are in it, and lighting/blending could be better. looks pretty good around the focal but still somewhat empty on the right side, maybe try adding more things to the foreground in the blank spaces to make the tag look less empty. and o/p map is its downfall for me mainly bc i cant stand it. looks pretty good, just somethings need to be tweeked with a little bit and added in order to make it perfect. KIU ;)

Ya i always suck with text... And i tend to overuse the o/p map. Lighting was hard to work with cuz When i got it (and no offense to my bro d), The lighting was coming from 2-3 different sides... which was tough to fix with burning and dodging and lighting effects.

No that is real CnC lol.

Agreed... and thats the way it should be

if you go on full time gfx sites for a little while your C&Cs tend to sound way meaner, but im not trying to be mean xD its just like dtown said proper C&C is that way, bc what it is, is criticsizing the tag/or w.e fully with no bull**** lol.

FFX FTW... im used to it, so dont worry about it. lol :)
 
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