it looks good, idk why
but seems plain to me
looks well blended,
i see some smudging
i would sharpen the face a bit
whats in the bottom right corner?
text is eww
what i have learned is that
text usually looks better when it is small.
what you dont want is the text to become
the focal, you know? and to turn the opacity
down and sometimes make the text a clipping mask
you seem to like big text,
try to make it hide behind the focal a bit
other than text it looks nice