FIRST SIG IN FOREVER.

[Silvyy]

Sorry the Image is MIA at the moment, Problems with PB.


CnC.

Background Info.

This is the story of the man on the moon is a quote from the rapper Kid Cudi, its supposed to represent a story of one who is alone, but is the bringer of the truth, as Kid Cudi himself, or at least that is what I get from his music.

Thanks!

Oh and posts like "I like Kid Cudi...." will = Bad rep

I am asking for CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM and your comments on my work.

 

[XGC Chocobo]

It all -looks- good, and in the end I suppose that's what counts, but what I'm left wondering -too much- with this sig is "what did he do to it?"
Normally, I love it when I'm not sure whether some elements are original or if the artist put them there. In this case, without any research, for all I know all you did was crop an image that could even have INCLUDED that text to begin with.
Do I love the way it looks? yes
Does it look well made? yes
Do I have -any- earthly idea who made it and how? no

On one hand it IS a silhouette, and light and shadow is all you really get out of those, but there are things you could have done to show some artistic flare, such as:

*Add some blending, lighting, or color changes around the edge. Use these to give a custom feel and a sort of border so we know this image isn't just cut off a larger one. I would especially play with other colors, the sky at different times of day or night, perhaps.

*Add in fractals or custom brushes some places in the sky to add more visual interest.

*Cut out pieces of the silhouette to let the "light" come through them.

 

[Silvyy]

Thanks Chocobo for the advice.

All the Buildings and Foliage is my doing, the Silhouette and birds are from the original Image, I am not very good with Lightning or Depth so the image is flat.