HALO.

[ChangeOfMandate]

Made a gift.

CnC?I think this is a trip back to my older style, so I dunno how it works. I tried white instead of black, to fit with the Spartan.

 

[The Big Tickett]

It is very bright. Try to tone it down a little bit. imo needs more flow. The colors kinda clash together. One of your best though.

 

[ChangeOfMandate]

Thanks!

 

[Fillyy]

You need to work on a bigger canvas man! try 365 by 132

 

[Scoggerbot]

I agree with the piece being too bright, especially the vast white space on the right side of the tag. Also, if you're going to color the piece, you might consider coloring the spartan's visor accordingly as well. It kind of sticks out like a sore thumb if you just leave it.

Good effort, KIU.