HHHHHMMMMMMM RAVE

azdahebrewhamr

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Yay or nay?

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KiD DMND

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you need to work on depth and lighting and colors
try not to put focel in the middle throws of compo
try to work on efx
but text is fine kiu tho
 

NecroWhuut

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effects look spammed almost, take the purple c4d out on the left it messes up the colors a lot. text throws off focal. work on depth, compo, and flow. colors arent bad other than the purple c4d. nice job, easily one of your best, your tags are starting to look more and more controlled every time ;)
 

azdahebrewhamr

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I followed a psd from a pro designer named KAM.

wasnt sure how he did some of it, bu i tried my best.

Slim, I disagree with the lighting... and i dont ussually put the focal in the mid, but i was just messin around.

Can yall define composition for me?
 

KiD DMND

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I followed a psd from a pro designer named KAM.

wasnt sure how he did some of it, bu i tried my best.

Slim, I disagree with the lighting... and i dont ussually put the focal in the mid, but i was just messin around.

Can yall define composition for me?

you can disagree with me all you want but its my oppion just looks like simple lighting not like doage and burn lighting

Let me see this "Pro" Designer
 

NecroWhuut

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Composition is how a piece is assembled. Good composition is usually needed for a good piece of art.
Example - If you add a paint splatter to one side of a tag, the other side is lacking something. If you have good composition, you'll add something to the other side. Maybe another splatter or white text. Something that makes it even on either side of the tag.
 

azdahebrewhamr

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you can disagree with me all you want but its my oppion just looks like simple lighting not like doage and burn lighting

Let me see this "Pro" Designer

Theres plenty of dodging and burning in this :) haha

And if you really want... ill change some of them to png's *ssiiggghhh
 

azdahebrewhamr

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OK... i wouldnt call him pro... but hes pretty freakin good

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KAMtummehbymistercopy.png

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- i just got basic ideas from this for the rave tag

The designer known as KAM takes credit for all four of these tags... I have done nothing to them in any way.
 
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