I JUST DONT NO

[XGC ReaverDemon]

im thinking that this is just too bright but i really dont no so you guys tell me lol

 

[ChangeOfMandate]

Don't like the text very much, and the background looks a bit weedy. Try smudging a bit, and adding more blues to it.Dark blue/black, might work for Shadow. I like how it looks like a water effect on Shadow, like a pool makes on a wall, and I like the area where Shadow is, but I'd try maybe smudging the background, and editing the width by a few pixels, preferrably shortening it.

Nice job, overall, but it could be improved.

 

[Fillyy]

It is bright by shadow, try making the background less bright but not shadow himself.

 

[Agony]

Erase the c4ds on the focal. The backround is distracting and takes away from the focal. Also, try a black and white gradient for the sig, and try centering the focal. It is too bright, throw some darkness on it, as someone else said, smudging would be nice, perhaps a canvas that isn't so wide as well.