I'm not feelin' it this week Ichigo.
There is no depth, the flow is off, the contrast is off which makes it look washed out. You lost a lot of quality from the image. I know it was dark and you were trying to lighten it, but you went a little overboard on it. The rendering is also not very good this week. Her torso and her legs are clear, but then you have her arms covered in a haze, as well out a haze around her everywhere else.
I know you are a good designer, but this piece really does not reflect that, in my opinion.
I think you should try again this week.