I'M THE TYPE OF GIRL YOU WANNA CHEW UP ALL MY BUBBLE GUM!

[Fillyy]

Lol. Thats a funny song.

 

[The Big Tickett]

Looks pretty good dude. CnC?

 

[Fillyy]

Yeh Ill take some. Can I have fries and an extra large shake?

 

[The Big Tickett]

I think a few more effect C4Ds would look good. The lighting is a bit bright. The second one is better, because it is not as empty. Not bad at all man.

 

[Fillyy]

I thought that too, but I only had a few good c4ds. And I wanted to try the style in the 2nd

 

[The Big Tickett]

The second one is really good. I like it. KIU.

 

[Sneakyy]

i like the second one..
i think the lines are a bit bold though

 

[Fillyy]

Yeah. Well if I lowered the opacity and there was a weird line, so I had to keep the white lines at max.

 

[KoG Houdini]

If you gaussian blur your C4D's they turn out way better..

 

[NecroWhuut]

hmm maybe thin the lines out, their too thick. the size and brightness of them disturb the focal point, just thin them out to like 5-6px wide or something and itll fix it. maybe try adding more fx. the fx you have arent rly that great, but they add flow which is good.

the only part of the tag that rly needs to be fixed is the lighting, it is rly problematic, it wrecks the color imo, and its too bright. just use a brush further away, or dodge if youve started burn/dodge yet. another trick is the filter>render>lighting efx. just line it up with the natural light and lower opacity to 40%, i know that how slim used to do it ad it looked pretty good.

sorry for the like negative sounding C&C didnt mean it to sound that way LOL just kinda happens. i like the stock, and the concept, but just keep working on your execution

 

[Fillyy]

Thanks common. Its no problem, I understand how CnC goes and I am glad you explained it thoroughly.