INTERVIEW WITH XDC RAVE XS

Exodus Dominion

Exodus Dominion

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Tonight I had a chance to Interview KOG Rave XS and found out some surprising details and facts. Section leaders have many different jobs, but the main job quote Rave is they are mainly here for advice, which shows a lot of how well section leaders help the community.
KOG Rave started out in KOG Vendetta three years ago, then his xbox red ringed and he went inactive for a while and came back a few months later. Rave States that his time in XG has been a smooth ride up to section leader and loves XG.

KOG Rave lives in New York, and attends college to become an English teacher in the near future. A few of his favorite hobbies include photography, soccer, and reading. Rave is single so ladies watch out for this college student. Among other things he enjoys are dogs and foxes, they are is favorite animals. A few people may wonder where on Earth did Rave pick his name, he got it from the show Rave Master when he was younger he watched the show and loved it passionately and sought to be a good name for such a noble leader. Since Rave is Single I’m sure if takes a girl out would have to be to Red Lobster which I don’t blame him the biscuits are delicious. The main part of the interview and biggest and toughest question though was whether or not KOG Rave XS was either a trekky or a Star Wars nerd. Rave answered with as he has never seen Star Trek except for the movies he likes Star Wars better, which sold me. When asked what is your greatest achievement in XG Rave stat splitting KOG Vendetta into KOG Armada.

I’ll have to say it was great interviewing Rave he was a character. He seemed pretty set in XG and works hard to keep us in line. Section Leaders help out more than we understand sometimes it was a great privilege to get to sit down and interview Rave.
 
SYN MsTwiztid

SYN MsTwiztid

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Ok. Thanks for posting your interview. I'm going to have one of your fellow applicants proof read and peer edit this for you as part of their application, so just sit tight.
 
Thready Sparrow

Thready Sparrow

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EDITED INTERVIEW WITH XDC RAVE

Edited Interview with XDC Rave

Original:

Tonight I had a chance to Interview KOG Rave XS and found out some surprising details and factsdetails and facts are pretty much the same thing, so I deleted "facts." Also, you want to say "about him/her" because the reader needs to know what or whom the details are about. Section leaders have many different jobs, but the main job just put "the main job, according to Rave,...quote Rave is they are mainly here for advice, which shows a lot of how well section leaders help the community. KOG Rave started out in KOG Vendetta three years ago,start a new sentence here then his xbox Call it "Xbox 360" not just xbox because there are 2 typesred ringed and he went inactive for a while but, not "and." It just sounds betterand came back a few months later. Rave States "states" is a little formal so I just changed it to "says"that his time in XG has been a smooth ride up to section leader new sentence hereand loves XG.

KOG Rave lives in New York, and attends college new sentenceto become an English teacher in the near future. A few of his favorite hobbies include photography, soccer, and reading. Rave is single so ladies watch out for this college student. Among other things I wrote "Among other things, he enjoys..."he enjoys are dogs and foxes, they are is favorite animals. A few people may wonder where on Earth did Rave pick his name, he got it from the show Rave Master when he was younger new sentencehe watched the show and loved it passionately and sought look at the edited version to see the changeto be a good name for such a noble leader. Since Rave is Singlecomma I’m sure if takes a girl out would have to be to Red Lobster I put this in parentheses because this is a side note and not critical to the interview. It is a fun fact and adds to the story though, so it can be includedwhich I don’t blame him the biscuits are delicious. The main part of the interview and biggest and toughest question though was whether or not KOG Rave XS was either a capitalize Trekkytrekky or a Star Wars nerd. Rave answered "Rave Answered that because he has never seen Star Trek except for the movies,...with as he has never seen Star Trek except for the movies he likes Star Wars better, which sold me. When asked what is use third person hereyour greatest achievement in XG commaRaveagain, "stated" seems too formal stat splitting KOG Vendetta into KOG Armada.

I’ll have to say it was great interviewing Ravenew sentence he was a character. He seemeduse "seems" because you have past tense and present tense both in one sentence pretty set in XG and works hard to keep us in line. Section Leadersonce you use the term Section LEader for the first time, it is ok to put XS in parentheses and then use XS every time after that help out more than we understand sometimesperiod it was a great privilege to get to sit down and interview Rave.

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Tonight I had a chance to Interview KOG Rave XS (Rave) and found out some surprising details about him. Section leaders (XS) have many different jobs, but the main job, according to Rave, is to be here for advice. This shows how well section leaders help the community. Rave started out in KOG Vendetta three years ago. His Xbox 360 red ringed and he went inactive for a while but came back a few months later. Rave says that his time in XG has been a smooth ride to XS. He loves XGC.
Rave lives in New York and attends college. He plans on becoming an English teacher in the near future. Some of his favorite hobbies include photography, soccer, and reading. Rave is single, so ladies watch out for this college student. Among other things, he enjoys dogs and foxes for they are his favorite animals. A few people may wonder where on Earth did Rave pick his name. He got it from the show "Rave Master" when he was younger. He watched the show and loved it passionately. He figured that it would make a good name for such a noble leader. Since Rave is single, if he takes a girl out they would have to go to Red Lobster (which I don’t blame him for because the biscuits are delicious). The main part of the interview, and biggest and toughest question, was whether or not Rave was either a Trekky or a Star Wars nerd. Rave answered that because he has never seen Star Trek except for the movies, he likes Star Wars better. This sold me. When asked what his greatest achievement in XG, Rave said it was when he split KOG Vendetta into KOG Armada.
I have to say that it was great interviewing Rave. He sure was a character. He seems pretty set in XG and works hard to keep us in line. XSs help out more than we understand sometimes. It was a great privilege to sit down and interview Rave.
 
Thready Sparrow

Thready Sparrow

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Although your grammar and sentence structure needs fixing, you seem to have a lot of heart and you seem to put a lot of effort into this.
 
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