JACKSON POLLOCK

Swift

New member
I was recently looking at Jackson Pollock's work and I was interested in the music theme so I made this. I think I achieved the Jackson Pollock ideal.

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Fillyy

Banned
The whole yellow splatter looks out of place. Id just delete it and add another splatter right behind it. The text seems very out of place. Like the sig is grungy, and the text is "fancy". The blue splatter on his body looks out of place as well.

Very nice perception of his work, just a few minor things that you could fix in litterally 5 minutes.
 

XDC Swagg

New member
I agree with Filly on all he said and the other thing I noticed that could be changed is depth perception/light source. Everything that could be fixed would take literally a couple of minutes so......Overall, I really enjoy looking at Oli Sykes tags and you did a pretty good job :D kiu!
 
Dude I really like this tag. It looks awesome. Great concept and all. Only thing is the yellow splatter on his head. Other than that I love it.
 

Fillyy

Banned
oh sorry about that. I forgot all about that. Anyway, Swift if you want me to delete my post, I happily will.
 
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