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[XGC Paramore]

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CNC por favor

 

[SYN Cheddarbob]

I like this one a lil moar

 

[XGC Paramore]

thxxx bro

 

[Sneakyy]

I think this one is better too.
but its too symmetrical..
and lighting needs help.

 

[Fillyy]

Agreed.

No lighting, and bad colors. I think a grey bg would have looked nice.

The fact that its symetrical, and the centered focal really kills the compo.

I agree though, this is better than the other one.

 

[The Big Tickett]

I am not a fan of this one personally. Colors are bad, lighting is insanely off, center focal is rarely a good idea. Needs more flow and depth. Overall one of your weaker pieces imo.

 

[XGC Paramore]

No lighting, and bad colors. I think a grey bg would have looked nice.

I actually tryed using grey it kinda didnt work out so well. As well as it was alrdy a pain in the *** since the back ground of that photo is black

 

[ChangeOfMandate]

Text is too transperant on the colored versions. Try making them brighter!