LANTERN

[azdahebrewhamr]

ehh

 

[NecroWhuut]

should erase more of the double near(around) the render, you should try using splatters and maybe bubbles on linear dodge. its good but it needs more "wow" which is where the linear dodge and splatters and complex/blocked lighting really comes in. maybe you should have stayed in colors, you can make them darker colors so it looks black and white-ish but you still have the color to make it more interesting

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

might want to make it origanal colors like green that way it has personality and is easier to pick out your focal point

 

[azdahebrewhamr]

colors were not workin out with this piece... it looked poopy. ill try some different stuff with this