LOOKING FOR SOME INPUT

[TRu SANDMAN Cd]

Ok guys & girls it's been a while sense I last posted in the graphic gallery and I need some input from you all. I like what I have so fare but i feel it could use more and I have two different ways I could go with it that i am liking right now but I have hit a designer creative road block on what i could add to make it better.

what do you all think suggestion comment??

 

[IGnzo]

lol to be honest with you i dont know either lol
i think you should change the text??
add a different c4d??
or maybe a gradient map??

 

[TRu SANDMAN Cd]

yeah i am not too happy with the text either just haven't found a text that looks cool with it. so put that in tell i can find one better. but the gradient map a good idea i'll have to play with that and see what it looks like.

thanks

 

[FoCus]

try blending the focal in better, also lighting needs work