MEH.

Quantum733

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This one's alright. CnC

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ChangeOfMandate

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Quantum. Is that Shia Labeouf?

Love it, by the way. The little circle of what looks like Lightning, blends well with the sweeping motion of the backdrop.

If it is, you're amazing.
 

Brohaffey

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Here's my CnC ... might be a little rusty 'cause I haven't done this in awhile. :)

The black line near the text in the lower right-hand corner is distracting from the focal, so I'd suggest maybe putting it on the overlay blending mode? Try that and see if it looks good. That or just take it out ... distraction from the focal is generally a bad thing.

Your effects are pretty nice, but something about the white splotches to the left doesn't seem right. I don't know if you lowered the opacity ... but I see the depth you were looking for. Maybe try to up the opacity, but blur it more. It's just a continuity flaw that makes those stick out from the rest of the smaller splotches on the right. This is a tiny thing, but maybe the lightning ring around him could be blurred some behind him ... to create more depth.

I think the text would've been better on overlay and kinda wrapped around the right side of the lightning ring ... see what I'm saying? Text is good when near the focal, yet keeping the flow.

Hope that helps! :)


-MasterBrent
 

KoG Houdini

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It looks really good!
I wouldn't say it is your best yet, but it is up there with your bests.
Also, i have to agree with MasterBrent, the black line is a distraction from the focal.
Text is good, but it could be blinded in more.
Definitely has some nice effects in there!
Nice Work!
 

Brohaffey

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You? Where'd you go in the first place? Previous tags? I know Slim, Jerriel, and Oxy ... but I'm not familiar with you.

Add meh on LIVE all of you fools.
 
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