MESSIN AROUND...?

[FoCus]

What do you guys think? say anything about it. I just wanna know what i can do to improve.

 

[sgt fruitsalad]

it seems very busy and is hard to c the focal. thts just qat i think tho

 

[KoG Concussed]

i kind of agree... but i see nice depth and lighting....

 

[sgt fruitsalad]

yeah concussed is righ a nice tag overall but very busy and very good in depth and lighting

 

[FoCus]

really? i think i failed with the depth and lighting..?
i agree its too busy. i was messing around and trying to try new things with PS.
anymore more comments? i could use it

 

[TRu SANDMAN Cd]

yeah the lighting is a little off and could use better depth but i think the prob is under your focal and to the right some that were it start to become a mess of stuff and you start to lose your focal in all of the stuff going on under it. i think it still has promise if you ask me just need some more tweaking.

 

[SYN Godfather]

seems a little oversharpened on the focal and.....idk.....its like the texture of the focal and the texture of the "whatever that it" don't work together, just a color change that doesn't match.....can't really explain it right.....

 

[XDC CHEF ZERO]

i would save it as a png next time, it tends to make the sig have an overal better quality,. cuz IMO the sig is a little LQ.

 

[The Big Tickett]

Where is the focal? Way too messy and LQ.

 

[XDC Swagg]

Agreed. (ALL IMO BTW)
Very messy( effects are everywhere )
Complete lack of flow.
LQ and streched out
The focal is in the center of the signature = bad. (rule of thirds)
Lacks lighting (white spots arn't lighting, it looks like empty space)
Lacks depth aka flat.
Work on your composition

Overall it is a nice signature with seems to handle some of the basics quite well. You should practice more with lighting, coloring, and depth. Also be very carefully with resizing. Post moree workkk

 

[Miss Bunny]

I like the background in the left half a lot =)