Sharpen up the focal a bit, maybe up the lighting a tiny bit, and play around with the colors. Cool smudging efx tho; I fail at smudging so I always envy tags like this lol
Awesome Job! I agree with the coloring though; try to bring it out more. I think a cool space stock or something with add some stuff? Idk sick job overall ! Def. your best so far for smudging