NEW STYLISH THING

SYN Cheddarbob

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One of my favorites so far, I <3 Asking Alexandria so it took forever to find a good stock. This is a new smudging technique I created when I implement all of my effects on a regular sig.
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CnC, but I want it legit. I need full description of what's wrong, otherwise, it's not CnC, it's looking and talking.
 

Sneakyy

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Jesus, is this Oli again??

The text just seems out of place,
not seeing much lighting either..

focal could use a light sharpen,
he also seem to be too bright compared
the the background

try puting in a c4d?
 

Quantum733

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Yes. V2 looks much better in my opinion. Good text placement, liking the effects. Only thing is there doesn't seem to be a definite light source and it kind of got scattered in the swirl thing and maybe sharpen up the focal a tiny bit. Other than that, I like it. Good colors, flow, and outstanding depth. I wish I had your text placing skillz :O

Kiu Ched! And whats Asking Alexandria?

Edit: Woah it is Oli lol
 

KiD DMND

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Ok the smudgeing could have been better but i like it
text is ok if text was needed
but yes i agree with adding more efx
overall better then your your other stuff
 

azdahebrewhamr

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the smudging in the upper right ruins the flow a little... just smudge that up a little and i think itd be fine. Colors are nice. Im not a fan of the txt, but eehhh, whatever floats your boat. Focal could use some sharpening. and maybe adding some texture to the background. other then that i like it :) kiu bro
 

SYN Cheddarbob

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Thanks for the feedback, and NO it isn't Oli.
It's Danny Worsnop, the singer for a techno/hardcore/screamo UK based band, they have a little more variety than BMTH imo.
But yeah, I like the feed back a lot. Thanks!
 

SYN Cheddarbob

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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMptKCprhKc"]YouTube- Broadcast Yourself.[/ame]
Just skip to the end around 3:20 if you're annoyed by the screaming, cause that's where the techno kicks in.
 

Quantum733

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Not bad, I'm just not into screamo as much. Metal, yes. Growling/screeching/singing in metal is alright. Screaming... not so much. :p Can't hate the techno though.
 
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