sharpen the girls chest neck because its on the thirds so her face isnt the proper focal in this case. and maybe try adding like a plus sign/triangle/or emblem, anything to draw attention around her chest, idk how well that would look in this case i would need to see it on. right side isnt my favourite, maybe you could have like mirrored it? the stars are maybe a tad to infocus, it kinda draws off the under-sharpened focal. not bad if you fixed some of the depth issues it would be a lot better