PHANTOM WEEK # 3

[XGC Phantom]

Hey wondering if I can play...lol. I try to do as much over here as I can, and wanted to start getting into these, Let me know what yall think, thanks:

 

[Jupiter]

The text and placement are decent as well as placement of the focal. However you are lacking depth. The castle should be blurred slightly as its in the background yet its just as focused as the dragon in front. You as well should try blending the edges of the dragon into the rest of the background a little better. Theyre too harsh.

 

[XGC Phantom]

I am gonna try working on this later...

 

[XGC Radioactive]

I really like your process. You've improved a lot! We all I think...

 

[XGC Phantom]

did some tweeking, any better?

 

[Jupiter]

I'll check it out when I get home fr work zooming in on my phone lowers the quality lol.

 

[Jupiter]

Much Nice job. I like the creative route you took with adding the background. The only thing thats messing it up is a line of some sort that didnt get deleted under the whisker on the right side. Small error but easily fixable usually.