Better.
I like the effects.
Focal is clear.
Flow is kinda contradicting, but not that bad.
Blue dots could be put on overlay possibly ... the look to much like paint drops floating in mid air.
Its just the facial features. It reminds me of the nerdy kid from role models. The one that always plays LAIR or something like that. Anyway, as far as work goes, this one is great as they all are.