PROOF I'M NOT TOO BAD

xxThanatosx89

New member
Okay I decided to make a sig to the best of mine and my phones capabilities this took 2 hours and 4 try's to get it the way I wanted PLz Cnc I worked really hard on this and gave it my all what do you think?
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SYN Jerriel

New member
Hey Whats up.

A few things i notice when i look at your sig is that i am drawn away from the focal (The girl with a gun.....ok i was not drawn away from it since well.....yes GIRLS WITH GUNS)

anyways, but yes the focal seems to be drawn away from the bubble things you put. The left side of the sig is where my attention goes for the most part.

It looks nice overall. Good blending (Better then what i can do ) and very nice use of color and stock(?)/Render(?).

Tip: Try to make what is around the focal darker a bit. just enough that she stands out a bit. Also (and this is just am presets talking) slim the tops down just a bit on this sig. Like bring the top of the sig down to just above her eye brows (leave enough room so that its not too far at the top) and bring the bottom up to the bottom of thatfold is on the biggest piece of armor showing on her shoulder.


Do you by any chance have the stocks and renders that you used?
 

SYN Jerriel

New member
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Basicly the colors are the flow of the stock. I try (well....kinda fail at it most of the time) is to flow with it. trying to add C4Ds or other things like that that flow with it.


I doubt this is even good so yea. That is my attempt of doing it. kinda failed i think.
 
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SYN MsTwiztid

New member
Okay I decided to make a sig to the best of mine and my phones capabilities this took 2 hours and 4 try's to get it the way I wanted PLz Cnc I worked really hard on this and gave it my all what do you think?
b4688310.jpg

I feel like there's just too many colors and they clash a bit. Not the colors...more so the variety of hues. If you could somehow make it a bit more uniform it would help a lot.

I see plenty of depth in the actual effects. The effects are amazing! I can't even fathom doing this with a phone. However, the focal doesn't really have any depth to it.

It kind of looks like you made these kickass effects, cut a hole in it, and just placed the image behind it (I know this isn't what you did, it just appears that way).

(PS! HER ARM IS BEING CONSUMED!!! FLESH EATING VIRUS!!!)​
 

XGC TOMMYGUN XC

Community Leader
well I hope you dont mind me taking your image and making a minor adjustment just to give you an example!!!! But a small change like this one can bring the focus back to where it should be, and all I did was take a black soft brush, put the layer on soft light, brushed around the edges and duplicated it a couple of times!!!


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