RADIO WEEK#3

[XGC Radioactive]

I wish I could have pulled in my red from his eyes, but it didn't work with me.

 

[Jupiter]

The text draws my eye before the dragon does..Maybe try decreasing the size and even the opacity if you have the option. Also, the dragon could use some blending work around the edges. Other than that, nice flow & use of colors.

 

[XGC Radioactive]

The text draws my eye before the dragon does..Maybe try decreasing the size and even the opacity if you have the option. Also, the dragon could use some blending work around the edges. Other than that, nice flow & use of colors.

alright, so lets work on the image, then the text.

I smudged,burred, and burned the edges. better?

 

[Jupiter]

Much. It also helps with depth when you work the edges into the background.

 

[XGC Radioactive]

Oh my, text on this one is hard...


Here's one idea, but it bugs me still. It was a good thought, just not executing as I wanted.

 

[Jupiter]

The text might be giving you an issue due to the placement of your focal. I notice when my focal is closer to the cneter, its harder to place text as it throws it off balance. I would try splitting up the dragon & strike. On the left side, place ragon" on top, towards the right so its touching the left side of the dragon, just barely though. The place "Strike" under it and move it a little to the left so its sticking out past dragon. Hopefully this made sense, lol.

 

[XGC Radioactive]

Solution, move it over!

 

[Jupiter]

Thats works too. Now just make sure you balance it out with your text. Try not to use too large of a size, however. I would say maybe 14px depending on the font.