TGUNDESIGNZ - WEEK #13 TAKE 2

[XGC TOMMYGUN XC]

LMAO ok so the image got changed so I decided to do this one too!! The Light source was a little tricky on this render cause there is that fire glow on the right side and a normal light source on the left side of the render!! Hopefully I got it looking right!! Anyways comment, critique or anything!!

 

[Jupiter]

Font choice is a bit hard on the eyes. It looks to be one of those awkwardly thin fonts that gets a bit jagged because it is so thin..If that makes sense. Also, its not very clear.. maybe bring the opacity up? Aside from that, maybe sharpen her face a little bit on the eye area mostly. Nice job overall however

 

[TheRealMrNUGGET]

there's a huge line around the hair and left arm that could be blended in

 

[XGC TOMMYGUN XC]

Font choice is a bit hard on the eyes. It looks to be one of those awkwardly thin fonts that gets a bit jagged because it is so thin..If that makes sense. Also, its not very clear.. maybe bring the opacity up? Aside from that, maybe sharpen her face a little bit on the eye area mostly. Nice job overall however

Not real sure what you mean by hard on the eyes, its a pretty simple font and easy to read........are you talking about the opacity on the "week 13"? Or Im not sure if your talking about cause the text doesnt pop out at you, if this is the case I have never really made the text a focal, text has always been a hidden and subtle for my work. Anyways let me know, I would love to understand what exactly you see and improve on the things I need work on!

 

[XGC TOMMYGUN XC]

there's a huge line around the hair and left arm that could be blended in

As for the line above the shoulder, there are a few lines in the background, that one is the most noticeable one......so yea if it is distracting I will definitely need to watch out for that and blend things like that in a little bit more so the dont take away from the focal!! Thanks for the comment.

 

[Jupiter]

Sometimes using a font as thin as the one you chose is difficult to read without straining your eyes. Normally if I use a font that thin I leave the opacity between 80 & 90. Dropping the opacity too low on thin fonts doesn't normally work well. That is however just my opinion.