okay Tommy, please forgive me.
(Blame it on Ixias, she told me to!!!)
first off, I noticed your c4d on the right hand side, it's a nice effect, but the fact that it only appears over there makes it kinda heavy on the right side and throws off the sig.
i feel like the colors are off too, you have the golden rod type then a yellow. Both colors work great, but i feel as if it's too harsh of a transition. I might would have stayed with one color. the effect on the right elbow is kinda solitary, and again i feel that if throws it off, maybe more of it or none at all?
again, this is way better than anything I could do.