VenerealMonkey
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VENEREAL #67
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SYN MsTwiztid
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The coloring is really bad on this one. The purple/pink does not go with the gold at all. Also, i feel like you lose a lot of quality when you're working with an image of a person, and you change their skin tone.
The flow is every-which-a-way. And the size of the sig is weird. Try doing a shorter width. As it stands you have too much space that you're trying to fill and it's hurting the overall quality of the design. It's also why your flow is so wacky. You tried to fill a bunch of empty space and the c4ds or effects that you used to do so where up-down, left-right, diagonal, just a mess.
And the touch of red for the tear of blood is way too much, imho.
Rave would also say that your watermark is too visible. xP
The flow is every-which-a-way. And the size of the sig is weird. Try doing a shorter width. As it stands you have too much space that you're trying to fill and it's hurting the overall quality of the design. It's also why your flow is so wacky. You tried to fill a bunch of empty space and the c4ds or effects that you used to do so where up-down, left-right, diagonal, just a mess.
And the touch of red for the tear of blood is way too much, imho.
Rave would also say that your watermark is too visible. xP
VenerealMonkey
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thanks
XGC TOMMYGUN XC
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Yea I agree, colors do not go well with each other and the blood tear thing is a bit distracting!!
SYN MsTwiztid
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Don't frown! Instead take the criticism and try again. =)
VenerealMonkey
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so I remade the whole thing. this look a bit better?
SYN MsTwiztid
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Coloring is a lot better, so is your flow. But the edges of your focal are faded a lot. Much better than your first one though. Good job.
VenerealMonkey
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It's not faded, I doubled up the background, put it in front of the focal and erased. But I get what you are saying. In PS it looked a lot less faded