It's very very pink o.0
I think your render lost quality in the recoloring because it has more shades and more colors in it giving it depth. Maybe if you could color it without losing that quality, it would help a lot.
And to elaborate on what Tommy said, having the two different effects really threw your flow off. You have 3 different directions going on here.
It's completely possible to use c4d and a tech background together, in my opinion, but you need to be mindful of your flow when you're placing them. =)