V'S WEEK 16 TG

[VenerealMonkey]

I enjoyed this one, finally got a load of my brushes back and some new plugins.

Hope you all like it!

 

[XGC SinCity]

Definately an impressive piece, maybe if you added some contrast around the render it would help it stand out a little more

 

[Jupiter]

I feel you could use a little more contrast. Im seeing mostly grey and not much in the way of black or white. You should always have a good variety when doing black & white anything. I honestly really dont like this one. I love the effects you used, I think theyre elegant just as she is but her placement is throwing me off. I feel like shes falling into your canvas and is completely out of place. Could just be me however.

 

[XGC TOMMYGUN XC]

I agree with Jupiter!! With vertical sigs, I feel, the rule of thirds pretty much gets thrown out!! The placement of the render makes the sig seem very empty!! And I think what Jupiter was trying to say about the black white and grays is that they need to blend well together. I notice you do have black, you have white and you have gray.......but that exactly what you have, white around the render, then black, then gray at the top, they are segregated and not blended into eachother!! BUT, I dont want to put words in Jupiters mouth, thats just what I see!! lol

 

[VenerealMonkey]

no doubt you two, thanks for the words. I guess it was b & w not gray n white. lol