XDC ICHIGO - WEEK #4

[SYN Ichigo]

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How's this one?

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[Jupiter]

haha love that you used my name
The color flow is nice i definitely like how you pulled colors from her outfit.
I would however suggest working on your depth a little bit. Blur some areas of the background maybe some of her hair thats further back, etc..
Another thing I'd like to suggest is working on your blending. Her edges are very noticeable. You want to try and make her seem as part of the scene rather than just placed onto a background. Other than that, nice placement and nice job

 

[SYN Ichigo]

Thanks I'll try to work on some of that later today.

 

[Jupiter]

Thank you for taking part in this weeks training grounds, by the way!

 

[SYN Ichigo]

No problem and you can use these if you want.

 

[Jupiter]

For the second one you posted, I like the direction you took. Awesome flow & the lighting is nice. I would however change a couple of things -- I wouldnt have blurred he stomach so much as it looks a little strange and it really didnt need to be blurred. I would however blur some of the wavy lines youve got going on behind her.. just a touch though, dont overdo it. Also, instead of using a black outline on your text, try using a drop shadow instead. I feel its a better way to have your text be readable, but not stick out like a sore thumb. Try it out Good job by the way!

and thank you for the offer however I pretty much wont be changing my sig for a while. I usually tend to stick with this one.