Thats pretty good Ichigo, there's a few things tho that could use a tad bit of fixing. One it's a tad bit too bright and it looks over sharpened (if thats what the problem is, not sure of the word it could be saturated i'm not sure lol) but the quality def looks off from what it could be. Best bet would be to use the curve tool to adjust the brightness and usually what I do is make another layer and take the brush tool make the color black, the size is on you but usually I try to make the brush small to medium and put the brush on the faded look brush tool. Then I go around and start putting black spots on where I think they should be at (preferably around the dark areas) since it helps give it a lil depth as well and then you could mess with the render effects maybe putting the brushes on soft light. Also the blending isn't too bad but to clean it up a bit I would use the blur tool and put it at like 15 to 20% opacity and start blurring the edges of the focal just so it looks a lil more well blended. The text is cool maybe a lil too well blended as far as the color maybe putting a drop shadow and stroke on it will help bring it out a lil more. But besides that very good job on this weeks TG, well done ichigo.