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SYN MsTwiztid

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New content!

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I'm really liking the depth in this one. Great work Mitch!
 

SYN MsTwiztid

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I'm not really liking the grunge one at all. You have two very prominent light sources. You have one Top Left and another Bottom Right. It also took me a minute to figure out what your focal is.

The focal is the most important part of the signature. The girl in the gasmask needs to stand out. It needs to be obvious what she is and she doesn't need to be crowded by effects.
 

VenerealMonkey

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Looks good. But it seems like the hand is the focal point as it it sharpened over everything else. Do a slight blur to the hand and sharpen your focal to give it better depth
 

XDC Mich2k

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Looks good. But it seems like the hand is the focal point as it it sharpened over everything else. Do a slight blur to the hand and sharpen your focal to give it better depth

Blurred the hand, But if his hand was directly in front of his face it should still be in focus.

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SYN MsTwiztid

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hmm. I see what Venereal is saying, but at the same time, you're right about the hand being in front of his face.

So this is where it gets kind of tricky. If you blur the hand, you lose your depth. But! If you keep it the way that it was, there's too much attention drawn from the actual focal.

So see if you can find a balance between the two.

If you can kind of blur out the wrist cuffs, i think it will help take some of the focus away from the hand. But you'll just have to play with it and work it out.
 

IXssl

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Thanks bro but i'm not nearly as good as you damn those are some good sigs bro lol very very good!
 

XDC Mich2k

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hmm. I see what Venereal is saying, but at the same time, you're right about the hand being in front of his face.

So this is where it gets kind of tricky. If you blur the hand, you lose your depth. But! If you keep it the way that it was, there's too much attention drawn from the actual focal.

So see if you can find a balance between the two.

If you can kind of blur out the wrist cuffs, i think it will help take some of the focus away from the hand. But you'll just have to play with it and work it out.

Thanks the blurring of the wrist cuffs turned out pretty good :D

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SYN MsTwiztid

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I'm still not liking the grunge one very much. But i don't know how to give you CnC on it. I can't quite put my finger on it.

But the revision to this one is great. Good work Mitch. =)
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