[ACCEPTED!!!] XGC ICHIGO APPLICATION

[SYN Ichigo]

 

[XGC Browncoat]

Hey bud, you got good colors on the pink and orange one but you should blend the edges of the renders in a bit better. This last one the colors are off and the render is really dark. When you get time you should do this tutorial.

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs31/f/2008/206/c/a/Tuts_are_Dumb___Donkey_Kong_by_GCSkye.jpg

Also let me know when you would be available next to get on skype.

 

[XGC Browncoat]

Try this one too

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs31/f/2008/210/e/0/Tuts_are_Dumb___Btl_Field_2142_by_GCSkye.jpg

 

[SYN Ichigo]

thanks for the info I can get on skype now if you can

 

[XGC Browncoat]

ok sounds good.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Famine is a boy....... -_-

Last sig try to make your focal blend without loosing William and detail

 

[SYN MsTwiztid]

It truely is a wonder you dont have gender identity issues. xP


Arrancar, i like the direction you are heading, however the last signature is definitely not your best. The colors just arent working at all. Try picking colors from the render. Also try to keep the text close to the render. =)

 

[Sicafoose]

Keep up the work.

 

[SYN Ichigo]

Done with some help from XDC Browncoat

 

[SYN Ichigo]

 

[xxThanatosx89]

The cleavage chick looks good maybe add a light black brush to the empty space on right and left

 

[SYN MsTwiztid]

Done with some help from XDC Browncoat

On this one, remember your rule-of-thirds. Also, try to avoid putting text on the focal. You want it close, but not on top of. Excellent improvement. =)

 

[SYN Ichigo]

Sry what is the rule-of-thirds?

 

[SYN MsTwiztid]

rule of thirds. Imagine a grid with 2 vertical lines and two horizontal lines making 9 boxes in your canvas. The important aspects of your design, such as the focal and text, should be placed either along these lines, or at an intersection of lines. Basically. =)

 

[SYN Ichigo]

Oh ok yeah Browncoat showed me that. We were kinda paying around seeing how it would turn out since her viewpoint was completely centered.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Idk I kinda like how it looks like she's holding the text

 

[SYN Ichigo]

 

[SYN Ichigo]

Idk I kinda like how it looks like she's holding the text

Yeah thats what we were going for =)

 

[SYN Ichigo]

The cleavage chick looks good maybe add a light black brush to the empty space on right and left

How this look?

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Better and that also added a little depth