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this was just for fun and to practice/play around with some new tools i did not get in contact with him in anyway!!!
let me know what you think
Hey Model!
I'm Ixias, i'm the leader of the Design team. =)
For being brand new to design, you're doing a pretty good job. I took me a good 2 months when i first picked up photoshop before I did anything that was even worth showing off.
The best advice i could give you is to do tutorials. Do tutorials until you're just so sick of them and you feel like you might lose your mind if you look at another one, and then do 5 more!
The more you do, the more techniques and styles you will learn until you can eventually find a style all your own.
Also, if you haven't already, i would suggest reading the thread titled, "Tips for Design Applicants"
It is important to remember that we are here to help you. We will never do anything to harm you or intentionally hurt your feelings. The Criticism that we give you is strictly to help you take your designs to the next level. We are all designers here and we understand that sometimes it's discouraging when you put your heart into something just to have someone else tell you that it could be better.
We will try to give you as much beneficial advice as we can, but we do ask that whenever you are asked to make a change, or redo a signature that you comply and fix the issue. That's how we know that you are learning from what we are teaching you!
Now, with this signature that you posted, there are a few things off bout it.
The very first thing i notice is your text! It's very very big and takes up a lot of space. You never want to try to fill your negative space with text. It draws far too much attention away from your focal and sends your eyes in multiple directions. Over all, it's just not very pleasant to the viewer.
Also, you don't want your text to be too fancy. The signature is about your render or your stock. That's your focal. Not your text.
The next thing i notice is your color. Your back ground is black and white, yet your focal and your effects are yellow. You always want to try to pick a color from your focal when creating backgrounds.
The 3rd thing that pops out is your flow. You've got it all crazy here. Your black and white background has vertical lines, but your render and effects have more of a diagonal flow. The red in this image denotes the flow going the wrong way, the blue denotes the way the render and effects naturally flow.
My eyes can't decide what direction they need to go, nor what they should look at first.
The 4th thing that throws it off is the focal looks distorted. When you are sizing your focal down to fit in your canvas, make sure you are holding down the shift key. This will keep it proportionate and not distorted.