Focal needs to be up higher and more to the left or right, needs light source on the right side. Also needs flow, try going without text for now and work on that later. But for just starting thats pretty good, keep doing tuts
its really plain in the middle and doesnt match, you focal should be closer to the middle but not right in the middle. needs flow and better blending. try using colors from the focal or just use the stock and add effects.
Thx what is focal? Also i did alot of erasing the editor i used does not have effects does anyone know a good free program to use cause mine are no that good