MasterLeaf
New member
Eh, I dunno, man. With your sigs normally being epic, this falls a bit short.
The render is too big. I can't tell if the focal point is their faces or her ridonkulously-long dress/hair. Because of the large render, it seems there wasn't much you can do to the sig. The c4d blending is great, but the entire sig just gets held back by the render, the c4ds appear to flow just everywhere.
It could've worked if you found some way to bring more attention to the faces, perhaps something like a vignette>. The hair would've been fine by itself, if you had cut out the bottom of the render. C4ds working with thehair would've been a great touch, along with the soft glowing you did on the flowers.
Another thing too is the text. I dunno, maybe there's really nothing wrong with it, it just strikes me as odd. You could've shifted it to the left cause Juliet blends with the hair and it's hard to read for some.
In short, it's okay, but you're awesome at this and you can definately better this one.
The render is too big. I can't tell if the focal point is their faces or her ridonkulously-long dress/hair. Because of the large render, it seems there wasn't much you can do to the sig. The c4d blending is great, but the entire sig just gets held back by the render, the c4ds appear to flow just everywhere.
It could've worked if you found some way to bring more attention to the faces, perhaps something like a vignette>. The hair would've been fine by itself, if you had cut out the bottom of the render. C4ds working with thehair would've been a great touch, along with the soft glowing you did on the flowers.
Another thing too is the text. I dunno, maybe there's really nothing wrong with it, it just strikes me as odd. You could've shifted it to the left cause Juliet blends with the hair and it's hard to read for some.
In short, it's okay, but you're awesome at this and you can definately better this one.