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georgeholland1

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its that right hand side again mate, just arrange the layers so that c4d layer goes under the gradient map, see if that helps, if not mess around with the layer properties until it looks blended in more. the brightness of it is taking away the focus from the render.

i think if you do this then move the text directly down in between the two line emerging from the render just to keep with the flow... also, im not sure if this will look right but try the font called Yellow Magician from dafont.com (when you type it has to be in all capitals) it looks right in my head anyway.

apart from that, yea it is a big improvement.
you have improved the flow from the render, and that circle thing looks in place. i usually dont like circles around the render but it works here.
alot of detail in the background but it doesnt jump out at you which is great.

sorry if this was a chore to read and hope it helps
 
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georgeholland1

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ps7 the good ol' days aye ;)

fantastic work!
when/if you add text to it, i think it should be bold font with overlay, i think it would look really nice.

trying to find a flaw i can give you constructive criticism on, but just cant!
 
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Xexxy

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lol
i feel special

and, ehh, i proll wont add text
if i was on my laptop(R.I.P)
I would...but it is gone =[
along with my 1000+ fonts
and 100+ bushes
and 100+C4ds/Wireframes
and 100+ Stocks
and 100+ Renders

Wow, i just realised how much crap i lost when my laptop crashed
sad face
but, o well
get it back monday guyz!!!!!!!!
so then youll see X's true designing pwnage!!!!!!!!!
Rawr!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Xexxy

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haa
i totally told him to do the pen tool XD
and hahaha, also got him to get rid of the purple gradient on the right half cuz it took away from the wonderful orangness on the left XD

hahah
 
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Xexxy

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haha
yeah
was kinda thinking that
looks like ur kinda pen
and not complicated enuf to be a wf
what exactly does pencil do?
lol
 
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Spoongem

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u didnt tell me to make the scratches on his face and his chest, or the pen tool in coming from behind him, or the hidden pen tool going with the c4d layer......
 
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Spoongem

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i just wanted to see what that sig would look like if i didnt have my c4d in it.............it looks ****ty without the c4d.....
 
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Xexxy

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yea
lol
i kant even clip mask in it D=

lol
i think im doing pretty good in it though
jsut kida redid a sig...teachin a friend about absract i guess you could say
he needed to fill empty space so i found him a tut 4 abstract
then took his psd and did it 4 him pretty much
but im not gunna give it to him
still gunna let him do the sig himself
was just giving him an example to go by
 
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Xexxy

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heyy guyzzzz
sorry 4 the double post
but i had to do it
i was talking to trickster about wht holland sed bout the c4d lookin funny
so we decided to take it out and add something better......if you notice trickster has his own style, as do most designers.
his style is extremely npticable in his bgs, since they are custom made when he uses a render
all of them have a kinda, absract look
so following his style...i found him a tut to use to fill that right side and make it look good
the tut was 4 an abstract tag. he gave me the psd to take a look at and i told him id play around with it a bit
which i did
lol

anyways
i redid it...but still using his render, his pen tooling, some of his c4d, and a few other things
i added gradients, redid the text, and added the absract
i take no credit for this sig at all
it is merely an example of what i think his should look like
and no titan, you cannot have mine
youll hve to go with what trickster make you
im really proud of my outcome and i hope his is much better
here it is
and like i said
i take no credit
due to the fact its his tag
his render
his c4d
i just modified a bit
hope you dnt mind trickyy
titanexamplecopy.png
 
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